Short story #1 ‘Green Eyes’ – each line is a fb comment

This short story was created through a facebook post where I wrote that first line. The rest of the lines are all written by commenters. This story turned out pretty good for our first attempt! 🙂

Short story #1 ‘Green Eyes’

While scanning the crowd looking for her best friend, her eyes focused on dazzling green eyes.
Those green eyes locked right into mine and I couldn’t let them go
It was as if time slowed and we were the only two people who existed.
Those green eyes were so mesmerising I bumped into the server and got drinks splashed on my dress
The moment was lost, but then I felt strong arms grab me & turn me around
his arm reached out and stopped me from falling.
All the worries of the evening were lost in my mind when I realized his strong arms were holding so close to his hard muscular body.
He wasn’t fazed and his hands moved to my thighs.
He found the one spot that warmed every inch of my insides.
I placed my hands on his chest, it was solid muscle.
“Who are you and why can’t I take my hands off of you?” He growled.
“I am your fantasy come true, now touch me” I whispered seductively
He whispered I’m my ear, “I haven’t been able to keep my eyes off of you this whole evening.”
I feel like I should say something but he has rendered me speechless.
I went to reach for a napkin to wipe my dress, but he grabbed my hand and said “no, come with me.”
One touch is all I need or is it?
His scent was intoxicating. Oh my god, what do I say?
There were those eyes, inches away from me!
I quickly grabbed my purse and, with my hand tucked into his, followed blindly.
He quickly looked around us as he led me into the men’s bathroom.
He kissed my ear and gently trailed kisses down my neck.
He picked me up and set me on the counter…
That held me and captivated me and I knew my body longed for him to touch me.
my body was not my own, it was his to command and take
I wanted to lick every inch of him
We had thought the bathroom was empty, but suddenly the last stall latch came undone, and a gentleman hurried out.
What? You tell me you’ve watched me all night and you are leaving me high and dry?

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